San Diego
Jewish Academy Sense of: contains figurative language (similies, metaphors);
marked in blue contains show not tell "golden lines";
marked in yellow avoids forms of the verb "to be" (is, are was, were, am,
be, being, been); marked in
red shows careful editing for spelling, grammar; marked in
pencil describes essence of sense using sensory language 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21
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Map | 21
Club | 21
Club Rubric | Sense
Web | One
True Sentence | Show,
Not Tell | On-Line
Resources | Glossary
| Quotes
| WordList
| Grading
Philosophy | Co-Teachers -
Doug
and Melissa
| Gallery
E-Mail Doug at mrdoug@aznet.net
or Melissa at mjmckinstry@earthlink.net