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Sense of:

contains figurative language (similies, metaphors); marked in blue

contains show not tell "golden lines"; marked in yellow

avoids forms of the verb "to be" (is, are was, were, am, be, being, been); marked in red

shows careful editing for spelling, grammar; marked in pencil

describes essence of sense using sensory language

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Site Map | 21 Club | 21 Club Rubric | Sense Web | One True Sentence | Show, Not Tell | On-Line Resources | Glossary | Quotes | WordList | Grading Philosophy | Co-Teachers - Doug and Melissa | Gallery

E-Mail Doug at mrdoug@aznet.net or Melissa at mjmckinstry@earthlink.net